A drabble

[alwaysjbj]

Title:
Author: Always_jbj
Rating: PG
Character(s): Buffy and Xander
Word Count: 100


Time slowed; the stake slid unerringly between ribs into the non-beating heart, and the thought flashed through Xander’s mind that it was almost as if  it were drawn there by magic. He watched as the flesh radiating outwards from the stake turned to dust one mote at a time and began to crumble.

“Buffy?”

“I’m sorry,” Buffy whispered, releasing the stake and bringing her hand up to cover her mouth.

He frowned. “You staked me,” he accused, lisping slightly around his shiny new fangs.

“I’m sorry,” the slayer repeated, a tear sliding down her cheek as he dissolved into dust.

Comments

[kazzy-cee.livejournal.com]

Oh my! That's fantastic.

I love your header too!!

[jerusha]

Oh, that's so sad...

[slaymesoftly.livejournal.com]

Oh dear. The power of a drabble is so on display here. Everything we need to know in one concise, hard-hitting group of words. Well done.

[ayinhara.livejournal.com]

It's amazing how much you can pack into 100 words.

[mystd.livejournal.com]

Very nice. That's really heart-wrenching stuff!

[spikesdeb.livejournal.com]

So sad. And she would do it, too. Lovely.

BTW, haven't forgotten the Good_Evil, but I think I'll just be doing the one - and from one of your banners :) It's almost finished, but I haven't titled it yet. I hope to have it finished this weekend. Sorry for the tardiness but I've been sickly :( x

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thank you, on both counts. The header was very quickly thrown together, but I was just sick of looking at my previous one. lol

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thank you, it was meant to be. *evil grin*

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

*blush* Thank you, my dear!

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I love drabbles for just that reason...I find you can hit so much harder with 100 words because you don't need to build up to or sustain it.

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thanks, hun. Yes, she would...she'd cry afterwards, but she'd do it.

That's okay, hope you are feeling better now. Just let me know when you have a title so I can personalise the banner for you. BTW, not sure if you (and your twin) noticed but there is a participation banner for everyone who took part in the art-a-thon.

[annapurna-2.livejournal.com]

So sad. But I have to admit that this ...

He frowned. “You staked me,” he accused, lisping slightly around his shiny new fangs.

...made me giggle.

Mixing humor with pathos is a very delicious mix.

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it...and that you got a giggle out of that line, I did too! lol