'Ted' Drabble

[alwaysjbj]

'Ted' drabble.

Title: Forever
Author: Always_jbj
Rating: PG
Word Count: 100




Ted made a last adjustment to the drive mechanism, before clamping her sternum closed and smoothing the skin back over the maintenance cavity. He leant down and inhaled her scent. Brushing her lips with a gentle kiss, he smiled in welcome when her eyes flickered open.

Hand in hand, they stepped over the girl’s broken body.

“I told her I don't stand for that kind of malarkey in my house!”

“She should have listened,” Joyce agreed, nodding wisely before turning to smile brilliantly at him once more.

Husband and wife is meant to be forever. This time they would be.

Comments

[slaymesoftly.livejournal.com]

Oh, that's chilling! Nicely done.

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thank you, my dear!

[velvetwhip.livejournal.com]

Deliciously dark!


Gabrielle

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thank you, sweetie!

[copykween.livejournal.com]

Ohhh! Nice, dark twist!

[jerusha]

Oh wow. That's like the beginning (or end) of a horror flick.

[unbridled-b.livejournal.com]

This actually gave me chills. Wonderfully written and very creepy ... you are the drabble queen! :)

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

*grin* Why, thank you, my dear!

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thank you, sweetie! It was actually the only way I could come up with to twist that ep (in a hundred words--because I didn't want to do anything bigger than a drabble).

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thanks, sweetie. I'm glad you like it.

I am reasonably happy with it... had to cull a couple of things that I quite liked. *sigh* Oh, the discipline of the drabble! lol I was actually just trying to wake the muse up a bit so I could finish my next chap...it helped, to some extent.