A new installment

[alwaysjbj]

Another installment in the Hearts Breaking Even verse... this time a ficlet.

Firstly I would like to thank the lovely talesofspike for the read through and suggestions!! **hugs you**

You will find the Series index HERE .   And the latest installment On the Edge of a Broken Heart, which is actually set just prior to the original  HERE

Comments

[speakr2customrs.livejournal.com]

Lovely!

[talesofspike.livejournal.com]

Well, you already know that I liked it, but I thought I'd make it official. This makes a lovely prequel to the first fic. Hallie is suitably sly and coniving, preying on Anya's vulnerability, creating doubts in her mind and undermining her instinctual feeling of belonging. I'm very glad that I had already read the other fic so that I knew things worked out in the end, but this little scene was just a lovely portrayal in any case.

[spikereader.livejournal.com]

Delightful - and I re-read 'Every Beat of my Heart' as well, which was a very nice thing to do.

[semby.livejournal.com]

Oh, very nice! Great Anya voice, and I love your descriptions of the way she thinks of her relationships with the scoobies and with Giles. Are you posting it to 12months? Also, I enjoyed the drabbles, particularly "A Heart's Refuge" - cute!

*motivates self to work on Anya*

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I am glad you liked it.

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Accepts cookie with gratitude *hopes it is a Digestive biscuit... maybe even a choc one!*
Thank you!!! I am really enjoying writing this series... it seems I have been biten by the Ganya bug! lol.

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

**squishes** Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed them both.

[talesofspike.livejournal.com]

That Ganya thing... It's like what they say about heroin. One fix and you're an addict. I thought I could try it just the once for Melissa's bbirthday, and here I am at twenty past two in the morning writing Giles POV...

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed tham... and *sigh* 'A Heart's Refuge' is the one that started all this! So I blame Selene.. really I do!

Yes I am going to post it to 12months... it was just so late last night by the time I got this up that I couldn't focus... HAD to go to bed.

And yes... You should work on Anya!

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Gah... crazy woman!... go to bed!!! Giles will still be waiting for you in the morning!! lol. **rubs hands in glee at the thought of more Tales!Ganya!!!**

[talesofspike.livejournal.com]

Yeah, but I'm awake now and I owe S2C a Ganya fic and he sounds so totally depressed with CW off on holiday without him and his daughter staying with her grandparents in Australia and if I finish it tonight he might get to read it before he goes to bed (since he's a night shift generally nocturnal sort of person).

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Awww that's really sweet!! I am sure he will love it.

[lillianmorgan.livejournal.com]

Just caught up with both of these stories and really enjoyed them – just delightful. You’ve got Anya and Giles’ voices absolutely spot-on, and what I most enjoy is that you're definitely not mocking but very sympathetic and genuine. And that’s hard with Anya not to turn her into solely a comedy piece.
Lots of lovely lines to pick out – but like that she amuses and interests Giles.
Great stuff – looking forward to more from this serious :)

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I am really glad you are enjoying the series. I adore Giles and he is always great fun to write.

Anya I love.... and I do enjoy writing her but she is harder work... to try and keep the voice as very much HER without going too far and making a mockery of her I find takes a lot of rereading over every line. I am so glad that you think I have her voice right... because that is the one thing about writing this series that does worry me.

Oh... if you want to read some absolutely brilliant Ganya try talesofspike's series... just lovely!

[lillianmorgan.livejournal.com]

Thanks very much for the rec. I'll file it away for later :)