Spuffy Drabble

[alwaysjbj]

Written for still_grrr

Title: First Glance
Author: Always_jbj
Rating: PG
Word Count: 171
Prompt: 009 The Bronze
Characters/Pairing: Spike
Note: I completely suck at titles, so I completely ripped off took my inspiration from this lovely icon that kazzy_cee made for me. LOL...Thanks, sweets!

First Glance

The music pounded around him; her body pulsing and writhing with the beat as he watched, mesmerised. A mumbled voice at his shoulder broke his concentration and he brusquely waved the minion away before returning his focus once more to the dancefloor and every twitch and shake of her lithe little body—drinking in every detail.

He could feel her from across the room, her presence calling to him like a beacon; the power radiating from her made his blood sing. There was something else, something more about this girl that he hadn’t felt with the previous slayers he’d encountered. She held him entranced as her body ebbed and flowed to the music’s rhythm.

He growled softly to himself and quickly downed the shot he’d been nursing. Shaking off the strange sense of foreboding, he pushed away from the bar—there was work to be done, and then he had to get back to the all important business of finding a cure for Dru.

Time to go kill himself a slayer.

Comments

[prophcygrl.livejournal.com]

Oh, I could feel that whole scene, sweetie. Beautifully done! :) ::squish::

[slaymesoftly.livejournal.com]

Oh - wonderful glimpse of what probably was happening during that scene!

[velvetwhip.livejournal.com]

I like this! It's really nifty! Great job, hon!


Gabrielle

[ayinhara.livejournal.com]

Well done! Even then he knew.

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. *squishes back*

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thanks. I like to think there was a little something--more--than just a predator sizing up his prey in that scene... Spike certainly looked more than just a little captivated as he watched Buffy dance.

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thank you, my dear!

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

Yup, he just didn't know what he knew! lol

[kazzy-cee.livejournal.com]

Eeeee! I inspired someone *beams*. I love the scene - especially: "shaking off the strange sense of foreboding"

Lovely!

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thank you, sweetie!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

[cindergal.livejournal.com]

You did a great job capturing that moment. Well done!

[alwaysjbj.livejournal.com]

Thank you! It is one of my favourite scenes from the show (one of a very long list of favourites, but still a fave lol). I just loved the intensity of Spike's gaze as he watched her.